Tuesday, May 8, 2012

So, How do you do what you do? by Judy Merrill Larsen

Um, I have no idea. Somedays I think it's like sausage or licorice . . . everyone loves it but no one wants to know how it's made. Other days it seems like utter magic. Poof. Who the heck knows. And then there are the days it feels like the easiest thing in the world and I can't believe I ever gnashed my teeth and considered finding a new career--perhaps pounding nails with my head, because, heck, that would be way easier.
Writer's Block? Sure. I have it. If I let myself. Writing Routines? Yup. You bet. Except when I don't. because here's the thing--it's all up to me. The only thing I can do is make the decision to write or to not write. I can call it block or routine or whatever. But it's really much more simple.

Tonight when I was at my power yoga class (Yes, I'll be sore tomorrow. I'm sore now.) the instructor reminded us that we needed to turn our minds off and just let our body do it. Our bodies could do it--it was our minds that were reminding us that we were tired or sore or wanted to quit. So just do it. Don't think.

 And for me, that's one of the hardest things to remember about writing. I have to let myself do it. Stop overthinking it (you know, all those voices that say it's not good enough, or not a big enough concept or whatever. Yeah. Those voices. To hell with 'em.). The words will come if I let them. Just this week I sat down with my manuscript. To revise. Again. I hadn't written much in a few months. And at first, it seemed so awkward. I couldn't find my voice or rhythm. Everything I wrote sucked. And it would have been really easy to close the laptop and walk away and throw another load of laundry in the washer. But, I refused to listen to the writer's block. I kept writing. I let me fingers type and turned off all the voices telling me I couldn't. And found my voice. It was kind of nice. And then, as the routine got comfortable--you know the routine--write every day. Find the time. Just do it.--all sorts of ideas came flying at me. It's like when I let my defenses down really cool things happen. I have a boffo idea for the next book. And it utterly terrifies me, but right now I also think it's the book I was born to write. I just have to make sure I don't let any of those naysaying voices in. Because those guys are just stupid.

What voices hold you back? And how do you shut them up? Me? I stick my fingers in my ears and refuse to listen.

I live in St. Louis, MO with my husband, am the mom/stepmom to five kids (ages 19-27), and taught high school English for 15 years. I'm over on Facebook. My first novel, ALL THE NUMBERS was published in 2006. 



Monday, May 7, 2012

The Cindy Jones Fiction Awards





The Pulitzer Prize board declined to award a prize in fiction this year, another hit in an otherwise difficult year for the novel.  And since the Pulitzer Prize people are supposedly a friend of books, their failure to recognize a winning novel is especially troubling.     

The good news is that I have picked up the slack.  Rather than go through an entire year disparaging the lack of a winning novel and forgoing the attendant celebration, I’ve done the heavy lifting and hereby announce my list of prize-winning books.  (The lucky winners will receive a link to my website and a self-guided tour of my personal blog, First Draft).

But first, my rules for choosing winners.  I must have read the book recently (since my last book-review blog post) and be able to articulate each book’s particular brilliance.  For guidance, I rely on the wise words of literary scholar, Lord David Cecil:

“…[the literary critics’] aim should be to interpret the work they are writing about and to help readers  appreciate it, by defining and analyzing those qualities that make it precious and by indicating the angle of vision from which its beauties are visible.”  

(Did you get that, Pulitzer Prize board?)

Without further ado, I present the most recent Cindy Jones Prizes for fiction:

Jane Austen Award goes to the late Elizabeth Taylor (the British writer, not the actress) for her body of work, reissued in this centennial year of her birth.  One critic nailed her last novel, Blaming, (my favorite, so far), saying, the style is economical and elegant as well as horridly funny.  Her sharp pen occasionally jabs me in the manner of Jane Austen. 

Peter Cameron Writer Crush Award goes to… Peter Cameron for his slim new release, Coral Glynn.  Mid-century period novel combines elegant prose with a story whose events turn pages for you.  It is possible to dream about being at Manderley again.     

You Had Me At Page One Award goes to The Poison Tree by Erin Kelly, a novel that could get by on structure alone—mysterious promises begin unfolding slowly and skillfully on page one—yet delivers on story as well.  The structure reminded me of Little Bee by Chris Cleve.   

Best Metaphor Award goes to Aimee Bender for The Particular Sadness of Lemon Cake in which the brother’s metamorphosis into furniture is a surprising and effective vehicle for conveying poignant loss.    

Hangover Award goes to The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins.  I read so far past my bedtime I had a reading hangover the next day.      

No Brainer Award:  The Marriage Plot by Geoffrey Eugenides delivers a complex novel with fresh themes and rich observations that challenge my status quo.  What is there to think about?    

Who Knew? Award generated a tie:
  • The Long and Fatal Love Chase by Louisa May Alcott.  A romance by the author of Little Women.  Really.
  • 11/23/63 by Stephen King.  My first Stephen King novel and I loved it!  

 You, too, can announce your prize winning books by visiting me in the comment section below.  I'd love to celebrate your winners and add them to my TBR list.    


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Sunday, May 6, 2012

My Favorite Writing Sayisms


by Maria Geraci

Is sayism even a word? Not sure about that. I'll confess, I'm one of those people who always messes up phrases. For the longest time I thought the saying was "Up and Adam” which made no sense but I figured it must make sense to someone since everyone was always saying it. I also got confused when Coldplay came out with Viva La Vida (I thought it was called When I Ruled the World), mixing it up with Ricky Martin's Livin' La Vida Loca. Not that the 2 songs are remotely similar, but well, hopefully you get my grift. I mean, my drift.

So this thing I do with phrases also runs true with my own personal writing sayisms. I just tailor them a bit to make sense to me. I have several printed out on index cards placed over my computer for me to look at for inspiration. Here are my favorites truths:

If I don’t know how this novel is going to end, then neither will my Reader.  It’s the sayism that finally gave me the permission to stop plotting. And trust me, I wanted to plot. Desperately. But I suck at plotting, just like I suck at writing outlines. I’m a pantser and I’m okay with that.

Write Like No one is ever going to read this stuff. Or, in other words, Shut up, Internal Editor. Whenever I begin to think “oh, I can’t write that,” I look up at the index card with this sayism and shrug, “What does it matter? No one is ever going to read it anyway.” Honestly, this is when I come up with my best stuff. It’s what lets my voice come through.

Kill your ellipses… Because I simply cannot kill my darlings.

Show AND Tell. Because occasionally you have to hit the reader over the head. Just occasionally, mind you.

Write almost every day.  Because almost every day is better than none and every day is too impractical (like most professional writers, I also have a day job and a family).

And my favorite sayism of all time:

There are 3 rules to writing and someone out there knows exactly what they are. In other words, never stop learning, never stop listening to advice, and never stop improving your craft. 

How about you? Any favorite writing truths you swear by?


Maria Geraci was born in Havana, Cuba, and raised on Florida’s Space Coast. She writes contemporary romance and women’s fiction with a happy ending. The Portland Book Review called her novel, The Boyfriend of the Month Club, “immensely sexy, immensely satisfying and humorous.” Her fourth novel, A Girl Like You, will be released August, 2012 by Berkley, Penguin USA. For more information, please visit her website at www.mariageraci.com

Saturday, May 5, 2012

Book Giveaway: First Husband by Laura Dave



Laura Dave has already won adoring fans everywhere from Hollywood to the heartland. Now, with a slew of rave reviews and astute insights about modern love, The First Husband is certain to deliver her breakout success.
Los Angeles–based travel writer Annie Adams thinks she has it all. Nick, her longtime film director boyfriend, has finally hit the big time, her column is syndicated, and they've got a great dog. Then Nick moves out. Three months later, Annie is married to Griffin, a down-to-earth chef with a restaurant in the Berkshires. When Nick asks for a second chance, Annie is torn between her husband and the man she might have been meant to marry.


Want a chance to win this book just out in paperback? Leave your email in the comment section and a winner will be picked at random after six p.m. on May 6.


THE WINNER IS APRIL BYRD!

Thursday, May 3, 2012

"His Wife and Daughters" by Wendy Nelson Tokunaga – E-Book Giveaway!


I’ve been having a blast clawing my way through the wild and woolly world of e-books with my chick lit mystery novel Falling Uphill. Now I’ve just released another—a women’s fiction page-turner that’ll make a great summer read! His Wife and Daughters is a family drama about a congressman’s sex scandal from 20 years ago and how it still haunts his wife and two grown daughters today, and I’m giving away 3 free copies!

Here’s the scoop on the book:

It’s 1988 and Trina Brath and her teenage daughters, Jill and Phoebe, lead happy and privileged lives as the wife and daughters of successful California Congressman Dan Brath. But that all changes when Dan, 52, is suspected of having an affair with Lesley Chisholm, a 19-year-old Washington DC intern who has gone missing. Soon Dan Brath is being accused in the harsh media spotlight of not only sleeping with Lesley, but responsible for her disappearance. Despite Trina’s standing by her husband—yet keeping the secret that he has cheated on her many times before—the incessant media scrutiny puts a strain on the family, and their lives to go into a tailspin. Eight months later, when Lesley mysteriously returns home safe and sound, Dan Brath’s career is over, and his family is in tatters.
Fast forward to today and the scandal that rocked the Brath family continues to take its toll. Jill has food issues and can’t trust men, Phoebe leads a self-destructive life and Trina continues to blame Lesley Chisholm for everything.
And now Lesley is breaking her silence with a tell-all memoir, which is sure to make Dan Brath’s wife and daughters relive the trauma all over again. Will Jill, Trina and Phoebe be able to cope, heal their wounds and move on with their lives? Told from the viewpoints of the three women, His Wife and Daughters is a moving and fascinating story of how one family attempts to survive the ultimate betrayal.

“A refreshing narrative with a strong sense of place: political scandal with an interesting twist that hits the mark.” —Kirkus Reviews

From President Warren G. Harding in the 1920s on through Gary Hart, Bill Clinton, Gary Condit, Elliot Spitzer, Herman Cain, John Edwards, etc., etc. (and not to mention the “secret” affairs of John F. Kennedy and other presidents), sex scandals and politics seem to go hand in hand. To enter for the free giveaway, just leave a comment here on the Girlfriends Book Club about why you think these scandals never go out of style and why these men always seem to think they can get away with it. And be sure to include your email address!

Three winners will be chosen at random after the deadline of Sunday, May 6 at midnight PDT. His Wife and Daughters is available on the Kindle platform only (on the Kindle reader, or free Kindle app for your smart phone, iPad, PC or Mac). And this giveaway is open to U.S. residents only.


Wendy Nelson Tokunaga is the author of the novels, "Midori by Moonlight" and "Love in Translation" (both published by St. Martin's Press), and the original e-book novels, "Falling Uphill" and "His Wife and Daughters." She's also the author of the nonfiction e-book, "Marriage in Translation: Foreign Wife, Japanese Husband." Her short story "Love Right on the Yesterday" appears in the anthology "Tomo," published by Stone Bridge Press, and her essay "Burning Up" is included in "Madonna and Me: Women Writers on the Queen of Pop."
Wendy holds an MFA in Creative Writing from University of San Francisco and teaches for Stanford University's Online Writer's Studio. She also does private manuscript consulting for novels and memoirs. Follow her on Twitter at @Wendy_Tokunaga and visit her website at: www.WendyTokunaga.com

Now In Paperback!


My proof copy!


I've told you before about my adventures with publishing this book as an ebook.  This was a "book of my heart" that was turned down by NYC because it was too edgy.  I finally got it up as an ebook in the last few weeks.

I was a nervous wreck - but my fans seem to love it!  It is a little weird to keep getting emails from my mom's friends (this is a very, very spicy book) who tell me things like, "It really got my juices going..."  Then I get follow up emails from my mom saying, "your book really got my friends' juices flowing..."

Other than that, I'm pretty happy with the results.  So, I decided to take it to the next level and make a paperback version available on Amazon through CreateSpace.  Apparently, I have some fans who prefer paper - so this motivated me to give it a shot.

I found this process far more intimidating that formatting the manuscript for an ebook.  I'd designed a cover that worked great as a thumbnail in ebook stores, but I needed a high resolution wrap around cover for the trade paperback.  Then, there's fonts.  And page breaks.  And blank pages before chapters.  At some point, someone recommended Hot Damn designs and I contacted them.

And that's when I discovered that there was no way I could do this myself.  If I did, it wouldn've been 2 years, not weeks before it was up.

Even the questions that the fabulous and amazing Kim Killion had for me made me realize I was lost.  There's a lot to think of and I really wanted it done right. 

I got the proof in the mail last week.  It's GORGEOUS!  I couldn't be happier!  It should be available for sale in a week or two at Amazon.

Now, I'm not saying you can't do it yourself - you probably could.  I'd been pretty independent before on these projects.  But most authors are way smarter than me when it comes to technical stuff.  I'm glad I went the route I did and I'd use Hot Damn again (and not just because it's fun to say Hot Damn!). 

Producing the book for sale is basically free - there's a $20 fee if you want it to go out to other markets, and I did.  And I paid a little for the proof to be fedexed because I'm crazy.  My only concern was with pricing.  Once all was said and done, CreateSpace told me the minimum I could charge for the book was $10.71.  That's a weird price.   And $10.99 seemed weirder.  So I went with $11.99.  I don't know if that will affect sales - but I'll keep my Girlfriends updated.

 When all is said and done, I'm thrilled with the whole process.  Going indie was scary, but holding a real, high quality book in your hands is AMAZING.  And the fact that I got to create the cover and write the copy was so cool - NY doesn't let you do that (and I do have one really ugly cover my publisher stuck me with). 

I highly recommend it.  If you have any questions - don't hesitate to ask.

Leslie Langtry

Wednesday, May 2, 2012


SIRENS AND BADGES AND BOOKS—OH, MY!

Judith Arnold

          I was eighteen months old when my parents moved to the town where I grew up—a town that did not have a library building. Plans were in the works for a fine new building to house the library, but for years the library was located in, of all places, the fire station.       
          Most people associate libraries with silence. By the time I knew how to turn the pages of a picture book, I associated libraries with noise and excitement. A trip to the library meant a chance to ogle the huge, gleaming fire engines and perhaps glimpse a firefighter clomping around in heavy rubber boots, wearing a slope-brimmed fire hat and lugging a coil of hose. Our town didn’t have too many fires, and we often suspected that the siren was used to summon the volunteer firefighters to the station for poker games. But sometimes there was an actual blaze, and the clamor of the siren was followed by the rumble of engines and the clang of bells as the fire trucks tore out of the garage.  The stacks of books in those cramped library rooms at the back of the fire station would tremble as the trucks sped away.
           At the age of six, I was finally old enough to participate in the library’s summer reading program for children. If anything could excite me more than sirens and big red trucks with flashing lights, it was the chance to earn a badge proclaiming me an Expert Summer Reader. To receive the badge, all I had to do was read a dozen books over the course of the summer.
          The week after school let out for the year, my mother drove my sister and me to the fire station to sign us up for the program. I left the library staggering under a pile of books, with the librarian shaking her head and grinning at the exuberant little kid seemingly determined to earn her badge in record time.
          I may not have set any records, but I recall receiving my badge in about two weeks.
          The badge was nothing special—just a bell-shaped piece of wood with a pin glued to the back and “Expert Summer Reader” printed on the front. I tossed it into a box of keepsakes stashed on the shelf of my bedroom closet and never wore it. But those two weeks were enough to addict me to the joy of blitzing through books in the summer. That was the summer I realized that fire engines and badges weren’t the best reasons to visit the library. The best reason was all those books wating to be read!
          Eventually the new library building opened its doors, just down the street from the fire station. Every week I was home during the summer, I’d bike to the library and fill my bicycle basket with books. I devoured Beverly Cleary’s Beezus and Ramona stories, Walter Brooks’ series of Freddy the Pig novels, Lewis Carroll’s fantasies about Alice. I wept my way through Charlotte’s Web and Stuart Little. I imagined myself a daughter in the One-of-a-Kind Family books and wished I was one of the youngsters in Edward Eager’s Half Magic and Magic by the Lake. I inhaled P.L. Travers’ Mary Poppins books, which were so much better than the movie.
          By the time I was ten, I’d graduated into the adult books section of the library. My summer afternoons were spent lying on a blanket under the willow tree in my back yard, reading To Kill a Mockingbird, The Heart is a Lonely Hunter and The Catcher in the Rye. A few summers later, I spent those steamy, lazy days reading anti-establishment novels: Catch-22, Johnny Got His Gun, One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest, Lord of the Flies, The Invisible Man. A few more summers and I was on my feminist fiction kick: Fear of Flying, Up the Sandbox, Memoirs of an Ex-Prop Queen, The Women’s Room.
          People tend to think of summer reading as “light” reading, “fun” reading, “unimportant” reading. I’ve always thought of summer reading as reading enjoyed in great, lusty gulps. Reading so absorbing you scarcely notice the summer humidity and the shriek of a fire station’s siren. Reading you wish you had time for all year long.
          In the summer, I get book-greedy. Give me a blanket under a tree—or, these days, a beach chair under an umbrella near the ocean—and a good book. That was my idea of bliss when I was six years old, and it’s my idea of bliss today.

Judith Arnold’s new release, now available in bookstores and on line, is Goodbye To All That.  “Simply one of the best books of the year. A must read!” New York Times bestselling author Jill Barnett.